Talk:Loreley (opera)
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Voceditenore in topic Description of synopsis (as of 14 Feb. 2017)
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Description of synopsis (as of 14 Feb. 2017)
editThe description of the synopsis of this opera sounds very weird, as if copied and pasted from somewhere without ever looking whether the grammar makes any sense. The description of Act 1 currently ends on this sentence: "Having learned from the engagement Herman Walter, Loreley catches the Rhine and into a nymph." What??? I don't know this opera and therefore can't correct the sentence. But if someone does, please do. – Aklein62 (talk) 15:46, 14 February 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for noticing this,Aklein62. It appears to have been added by an IP who has an imperfect command of English. I'm going to revert it to the previous much shorter but infinitely clearer version and will try to re-expand it properly in a few days. Voceditenore (talk) 18:25, 14 February 2017 (UTC)