Talk:London-class battleship/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: L293D (talk · contribs) 02:47, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

Image review

Every image was necessarily taken before 1923, so that's easy.

Infobox

Everything consistent with prose.

Lead

• London-class ships began to be transferred to - both active and passive voice, reword
  • Done
• but they were withdrawn in May to reinforce the Italian fleet blockading the Austro-Hungarian Navy in the Adriatic Sea. - link Otranto Barrage and specify that the blockade was successful only in blockading surface ships, U-boats could pass through easily
  • Done

Construction

• Change section title to "Ships" or something like that
  • I prefer the current heading, since it's a summary of the construction of the ships, and it's an easy link in the ToC for a reader who might want to know when the ships were built.

Really impressive article - I've had a hard time finding anything to suggest. L293D (☎ • ✎) 17:44, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for your review. Parsecboy (talk) 19:27, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

GA Progress

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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