Talk:Liquorice (song)/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by IndianBio in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 10:21, 1 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

  • and was later released commercially --> in what format?
  • In support of the song itself and 1991 --> remove itself
  • The music sample you can use the {{listen}} template and add it in the composition section. At present its WP:NFCC#8 criteria is in question
  • Liquorice" was described as an acid house track --> By?
  • a house song produced by British electronic musician Lone, who also produced "Liquorice" --> Contradicts with the infobox
  • "Harlem-street-slang-derived wordplay," --> quotes before comma
  • Banks posted "Liquorice" onto her Tumblr account --> on her Tumblr
  • On a mixed review --> In a mixed review
  • The live performances do not have any review associated with them? It seems so incomplete

On hold for seven days, I would suggest further improvements to song content. You can ask my help also if you want. —Indian:BIO [ ChitChat ] 10:21, 1 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

@: any luck? —Indian:BIO [ ChitChat ] 07:12, 2 June 2015 (UTC)Reply
@IndianBio: I think that's all I could do. :P Simon (talk) 04:36, 6 June 2015 (UTC)Reply
Ok then, passing. —Indian:BIO [ ChitChat ] 06:36, 6 June 2015 (UTC)Reply