Talk:Lemonade (Alexandra Stan song)/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Cartoon network freak in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 12:06, 3 July 2016 (UTC)Reply


Hello, I'm MarioSoulTruthFan and I'll be reviewing this article over the course of the week. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:06, 3 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

Infobox

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  • Alt → Stan is portrayed posing (sounds terrible)
  • Label → "This field should refer to the label on which the single/album was originally released". You have like 5 labels!!

Lead

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  • recorded by Romanian recording → recorded by Romanian singer and songwriter
  • You should mention the release date in Japan since it was recorded for that re-issue album.
  • You should state that was compared to Britney's hold it against me or even Lady Gaga
  • Commercially, "Lemonade" was successful on several European record charts → Commercially, "Lemonade" was peaked on some European record charts
  • with it being → becoming a
  • by the Federation of the Italian Music Industry → by the Federation of the Italian Music Industry (FIMI)

Composition

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  • Move the sample here with and add a description.
  Fixed Moved sample.
  • They → who?

Critical reception

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  • music critics → Link music journalism

Music video

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  • "Still" → Shot
  • "Direct Lyrics later compared this outfit to gipsy culture" → remove "later"

Track listings

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  • Needs language parameter on the reference.
  Fixed Added language to each iTunes link.

Credits and personnel

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  • director → music video director. Is he really on the liner notes? Otherwise I would move it to the music video section.
  Fixed Removed the director's credit.
  • Mastering, mixing, recording? Stan for sure didn't do all of these by herself?
Added info for recording, but I couldn't find anything on mastering and mixing. Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:12, 7 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

Charts and certifications

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Weekly charts

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  • Fine

Year-end charts

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  • The peak is not on the given citation.
  Fixed Oh sorry, the position was no 64.

Certifications

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  • Fine

Release history

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  • Make a small prose regarding the release here.

Reference

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  • YouTube → noitalic
  • Link the first "iTunes Store"
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  • Remove the music video from the infobox and add it here.
  Fixed Moved music video.

Categories

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  • 2012 songs → should be after the 2012 singles

Overall GA review

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@Cartoon network freak: please hold until I comment on everything. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 10:56, 7 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

  • You need a commercial performance section! Have you forgot?

@Cartoon network freak: address the issues I have raised including the one above.

@MarioSoulTruthFan: All fixed; thanks for your review!! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:56, 7 July 2016 (UTC)Reply