Talk:Laguna Miscanti/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 05:00, 26 October 2021 (UTC)

I'll look at this tomorrow when I am more awake! — GhostRiver 05:00, 26 October 2021 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

• No comma after "of the Antofagasta Region"

  Removed. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

• "Miñiques volcano" → "The Miñiques volcano"

  I don't think that a "the" is strictly necessary. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

• To be pedantic, the "Antofagasta Region" is not mentioned in the body and is not cited

  Now it is with citation. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

• Diacritic needed in "Laguna Miñiques"

  Done? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

Geography

• Laguna Miñiques should be linked upon its first mention (5,000 tourists) and delinked in the following clause

  It already is in the lead? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

Hydrography and geology

• "It is a maximally" → "Laguna Miscanti is a maximally"

  Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

• Diacritic needed for Cerro Miñiques

  Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

• Delink Laguna Miñiques in this section

Hydrology

• "ranging from the Miocene to Holocene age"

  Not sure that this is correct - Miocene is often a modifier to "age" rather than a proper noun. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Climate

• "a little warmer" – can we be more precise?

  No, sorry. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

• Delink Holocene, linked above
• Hyphen to em dash in "late Pleistocene-early Holocene wet period"

  Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

Biology

• Comma after "Widgeonweed grows at the lakeshores"

References

• The first two sources are inconsistent with the citation style used in all future refs
• All online sources should have access dates, including the journal articles being linked

  I don't think that journal sources get access dates even when linked. I think I got the reports, however. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

General comments

• Image and map are properly licesned and relevant
• No stability concerns in the revision history
• Earwig score looks good

  @GhostRiver: Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

  • Jo-Jo Eumerus I have left additional comments on the sections I did not get to earlier. — GhostRiver 01:33, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
    • @GhostRiver: I think all is done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
      • I have made a few additional changes myself; things linked in the lede still need to be linked upon their first mention in the body. In any case, I am passing this article. — GhostRiver 16:40, 1 November 2021 (UTC)