Talk:La Barceloneta, Barcelona

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Noktulo in topic Copyediting

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Map needed edit

Geographical context within greater Barcelona is not clear. Need map(s w/insets) similar to other articles showing Barceloneta within Barcelona, plus poss. narrative desc. of conventional bpundaries. --D Anthony Patriarche (talk) 13:14, 30 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

Copyediting edit

Whole article needs copyediting, esp re English usage. Reads like translation of foreign language page. Introductory phrase of many paras is awkward, plus some internal adv phrases. --D Anthony Patriarche (talk) 13:28, 30 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

I added the Travel Guide tag, as language like "This is a good starting point for whatever itinerary there may be to adventure through La Barceloneta" reads more like a travel guide than an encyclopedia. noktulo (talk) 00:53, 27 July 2022 (UTC)Reply