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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 17:34, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


I will review this article. Thank you.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 17:35, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

Ssven2 A reminder since it has been almost a month now. Yashthepunisher (talk) 04:45, 5 August 2019 (UTC)
I'll start posting comments tonight, Yash. Sorry I took up so much of time.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 08:28, 5 August 2019 (UTC)
Comments
  • Is it Khurana or Khurrana? Be consistent with the name right throughout the article. I think its the first but its your call.
  • "Written by Jaideep Sahni, the film stars: Anupam Kher, Boman Irani Parvin Dabas, Vinay Pathak, Ranvir Shorey and Tara Sharma in the lead roles." — Remove the ":" and add a comma (",") after Boman Irani.
  • "and seek the help of Meghna's mentor, Bapu, to act as the owner of the land looking for a buyer." — Do mention that Bapu's a drama theatre troupe manager and owner and then mention subsequently about the theatre and the troupe afterwards for clarity's sake.
  • "growing up in middle-class Delhi" doesn't quite gel well with readers. Kinda vague. Maybe something like "growing up in a middle-class house in Delhi" or "growing up with a middle-class background in Delhi"?
  • "Banerjee said a real life experience when he Sahni witnessed their father being insulted by someone powerful helped them to develop the character of the antagonist Khurrana." — Is it Banerjee's father or Sahni's father or both their fathers? Do clearly specify.
  • "He also watched real footage captured using hidden camera's to understand how they behaved" — Isn't it "cameras" and not "camera's"?
  • "Kher said that he tried to boost the team's morale as the film was "made while enduring a lot"." — Enduring what?
  • Isn't it Meghna instead of Parvathy?
  • "Banerjee was initially reluctant to give Parvin Dabas the role of Chironjilal but later decided to do so" — Its Chiraunjilal right? and also why did he choose to give the role to him eventually? Any reason for that?
  • What other company did Hiremath have?
It's not mentioned in the source. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:24, 6 August 2019 (UTC)
  • "The film's small budget meant there were limited reels to shoot on two occasions." — You mean they "had limited reels" with them to shoot on two occasions right? Are those occasions mentioned by any chance?
  • Wikilink the publishers, websites and newspapers' names on the first instance they are mentioned (or) whenever they are mentioned.

That's about it from me, Yashthepunisher. I don't see any major issues with the release and reception and post release sections. Resolve the above comments and the article is passed.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 15:03, 5 August 2019 (UTC)

Ssven2 Your queries have been resolved. Thanks for reviewing the article. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:24, 6 August 2019 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:  
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:  
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
  7. Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
    Pass or Fail:  

Thank you for addressing the above comments, Yashthepunisher. Congratulations, the article has passed.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 12:25, 8 August 2019 (UTC)

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