Talk:Khadeen Carrington/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:27, 8 June 2018 (UTC)Reply

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 16:27, 8 June 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • "He competed in college basketball for Seton Hall. The son of Reynold Carrington, a former professional soccer player and coach, Khadeen starred at Bishop Loughlin Memorial High School in Brooklyn, New York. " - reword this section to The son of former professional soccer player and coach Reynold Carrington, he competed in college basketball for Seton Hall Pirates and later starred at Bishop Loughlin Memorial High School in Brooklyn, New York.
  • "As a senior, he led the CHSAA's" - write out the full name of the CHSAA and put the acroynms in parentheses
  • "and was named the Brooklyn boys player of the year by the New York Daily News." - Brookyn Boys' Player of the Year by New York Daily News.

Early life and high school career

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College career

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References

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Right, that is all of the nibbles from me. This review will be put on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 18:57, 8 June 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Editorofthewiki: Since all of my queries have been addressed, this article can now attain the rank of GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:54, 9 June 2018 (UTC)Reply