Talk:Katy Perry/GA2
GA Review edit
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Hi again! I will once again review this article. If the nominator objects to that, I will freely remove myself from the review, and let someone else do it. Check back soon for a review! CarpetCrawler (talk) 21:26, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
GA on hold edit
The article looks MUCH better, and has gone through quite an improvement! I have only one concern.
- "It was reported in March 2009 by several online blogs that she started dating recording artistJosh Groban. [12]" Looks like it could be re-written so that the sentence won't be all by itself in a one sentence paragraph. Maybe you could merge it into another paragraph? Also, the citation needs to be properly formatted.
Other than that, I have no other qualms, so I will merely place this article on hold. When my concerns have been addressed, please send me a message on my talkpage. I will give you seven days to work on my requirements. Good luck! CarpetCrawler (talk) 22:06, 23 March 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for rereviewing this article. I'll work on it real soon. --Efe (talk) 04:22, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
GA pass edit
Congratulations, the article has passed! Great improvements made, and great work to everyone involved! CarpetCrawler (talk) 21:20, 25 March 2009 (UTC)