Talk:Judas (Lady Gaga song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:11, 22 June 2011 (UTC)

Since I'm finally out from school I now have time to go on Wikipedia! I'll be reviewing the article shortly.--Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:11, 22 June 2011 (UTC)

Lead

• "Judas" is a dance song that speaks of a woman in love with a man who betrays her, while simultaneously embodying things that have haunted her in the past, thus representing something that was bad for her – something she could not escape. < I don't know if it's just me but this is difficult to understand possibly because of the ending
• The artwork for the single was designed by Gaga in Microsoft Word and features a black background with the word "Judas" written in red capital letters in Impact font and took the picture with her cell phone for texture. < It is a run on sentence will no commas to break it up. The final statement about using her cell phone needs a "she" before took. Try breaking it up a bit.
• but in the end < doesn't really fit here does it?

Background

• Gaga confirmed "Judas" on Ryan Seacrest's radio show on February 14, 2011 < confirmed Judas? Do you mean it's release as the second single?
• Fernando Garibay, one of the producers of Born This Way described the song as about sometimes not choosing the right choice. < is this not redundant since Gaga soon after this creates a major explanation?
• On the radio show Last Call with Carson Daly, Gaga explained to the host Carson Daly <isn't it obvious that the host is Carson Daly?

Live performances

• monk-like garments, her side. < "her side" doesn't make sense

Short review I know, but I have read the article over and over again for the past 2 hours and can see nothing else to comment on. Great work on the article! Not much to fix here, as soon as you get to them it'll be GA.--Blackjacks101 (talk) 14:20, 22 June 2011 (UTC)

Lol, thanks for the review, I have tweaked everything that you noted. Please check if they are all right. — Legolas ^(talk2me) 14:41, 22 June 2011 (UTC)