Talk:Jon Anabo/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:17, 10 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

Will review. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 09:17, 10 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Early career

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  • "Anabo attended Armijo High School before playing college football at Vallejo Junior College " - before going on to play college football at Vallejo Junior College   Done
  • "In 1961, Anabo transferred to Fresno State to play for the Bulldogs" - mention it was the Fresno State Bulldogs and wikilink it since it is the first time it will be mentioned in the prose   Done
  • "Anabo was credited for leading the Bulldogs to an upset over the University of the Pacific in the final seconds of the game." - He was credited for leading the Bulldogs to an upset victory of the University of the Pacific in the game's final seconds   Done
  • "Fresno State defeated Bowling Green 36–6" - reword to Fresno State defeated the Bowling Green Falcons 36–6   Done
  • Wikilink United Press International   Done
  • "In 1962, Anabo and Carter were described as the "best 1-2 quarterback punch on the West Coast". - described by whom?
The source doesn't specifically say. It says "Their pair of quarterbacks, Jon Anabo and Beau Carter, are billed as the best 1-2 quarterback punch on the West Coast" Thoughts? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:32, 16 November 2017 (UTC)Reply
  • Add a wikilink to touchdown again to help those unfamilar with football   Done

Professional career

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  • Wikilink the first mention of Cleveland Browns, the Edmonton Eskimos and the Canadian Football League in the prose   Done
  • Perhaps an explanation of what position Walter Roberts played in will help non-football fans   Done

Overall a good effort has been made. On hold until the minor quibbles have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 10:33, 10 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

I'm helping Rob with his reviews. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 05:58, 16 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

Infobox

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I think these come from the Canadian Pro Football Encyclopedia source. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:26, 16 November 2017 (UTC)Reply
@WikiOriginal-9: Then I suggest that they be directly linked to the encyclopedia source. MWright96 (talk) 19:12, 16 November 2017 (UTC)Reply
@BU Rob13: Can you confirm? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 21:25, 16 November 2017 (UTC)Reply
Yes, everything in the infobox comes from that source. Specifically, the pages in the 140ish range for the articles currently under review (whichever one is actually cited for the statistics in the article). ~ Rob13Talk 22:07, 16 November 2017 (UTC)Reply
@WikiOriginal-9: Can't find an appropriate way to add the source so I have moved to the quarterback section. MWright96 (talk) 12:40, 17 November 2017 (UTC)Reply