Talk:Jean-Hilaire Aubame/GA1

GA Review

• In thanks for his help, M'ba appointed Aubame as foreign minister in replacement of André Gustave Anguilé. - In thanks? No, Ed.
  • Changed to "For his cooperation, M'ba appointed Aubame foreign minister, replacing André Gustave Anguilé." --I'm an Editorofthewiki^{[citation needed]} 23:06, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
• Under this system, M'ba may appoint ministers whose functions and limitations are decided by him. - Do you mean he could? May is future tense, not past tense.
  • Done. --I'm an Editorofthewiki^{[citation needed]} 23:09, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
• Aubame resolved the problem by resigning from his post as President of the Supreme Court, complicating matters for M'ba. - This is total POV. Can you change "resolved" to something less POV.
  • I fail to understand how "this is total POV". Please elaborate. --I'm an Editorofthewiki^{[citation needed]} 23:10, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
    • Nevermind, I fixed it myself. --Lord₪Sunday 23:26, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
• Amoung M'ba supporters, they were not; a small bomb exploded outside the United States Embassy in Libreville on 6 March. - Spelling error, and among needs to be replaced, previous sentence uses it.
  • Done. --I'm an Editorofthewiki^{[citation needed]} 23:14, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
• Image:Afrique 32.JPG, and Image:Mba.jpg are proposed for deletion, I would suggest either replacing them or just removing them altogether. --Lord₪Sunday 23:00, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
  • If they are deleted, I will remove them from the article. It is currently unclear whether they are copywrite violations or Polaert is simply scanning some of his images. --I'm an Editorofthewiki^{[citation needed]} 23:14, 27 August 2008 (UTC)

Overall, an excellent article. Just fix those, and I'll pass it. --Lord₪Sunday 23:00, 27 August 2008 (UTC)