Talk:Japanese Committee on Trade and Information/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Yulun5566 (talk · contribs) 08:57, 28 September 2015 (UTC)

• Use of referencing is diverse and well placed in article
• "Its publicly stated purpose was to promote the "traditional friendship" between the USA and Japan" Sounds awkward and should be refined
• "Obana and Townsend plead guilty, though Townsend denied that he was acting on behalf of Japan" Use of present tense is grammatically false when describing an event from the past
• There were too much details in the article that has almost no relation with the topic itself
• Average article on the whole, and if not refined, it would not qualify for GA

New editor needed to take over this review.

The "review" above is not in accordance with Wikipedia:Good article criteria. Experienced GA reviewer familiar with the process needed. — Maile (talk) 16:55, 28 September 2015 (UTC)