Talk:Jacob Wetterling Crimes Against Children and Sexually Violent Offender Registration Act

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Bmichelleh in topic Article Review

For those interested.

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I thought some folks might be interest in this NYTimes OpEd piece out today. The information discussed in it is relevant to this and other pages. — James Cantor (talk) 12:15, 8 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

Article Review

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The first major issue in this article is that there is no sourcing whatsoever. Because I am interested in this topic, I will do research to hopefully fix this. I also feel that this article has poor structure-- another thing I plan to fix. The first paragraph, or lead, effectively describes what the act is meant to do and why it is named "Jacob Wetterling Crimes Against Children and Sexually Violent Offender Registration Act." The article itself is fairly well written. The grammar is good and the information in neutral. Thanks, Bmichelleh (talk) 03:18, 28 June 2019 (UTC)Reply