Talk:J. Lister Holmes
Did you know nomination
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The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by Launchballer talk 20:31, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- ... that J. Lister Holmes switched from designing Tudor Revival cottages to Modernist civic buildings?
- Source: Dietz, Duane A. (2014). "J. Lister Holmes". In Ochsner, Jeffery Karl (ed.). Shaping Seattle Architecture: A Historical Guide to the Architects (2nd ed.). Seattle: University of Washington Press. ISBN 9780295806891. JSTOR j.ctvcwnd1m. https://www.jstor.org/stable/j.ctvcwnd1m.42 pp. 248-253
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 04:56, 16 August 2024 (UTC).
Did you know nomination
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- ... that William Aitken, William J. Bain, J. Lister Holmes, John T. Jacobsen, and George W. Stoddard collaborated in the early 1940s to design the nation's first racially integrated housing development?
- Source: https://pcad.lib.washington.edu/building/5319/ Pacific Coast Architecture Database, University of Washington.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Oliver Gould Jennings House (x2), Template:Did you know nominations/Edwin Ford Piper, Template:Did you know nominations/Portrait of Cornelis van der Geest
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 18:39, 21 August 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:51, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: Nice work. Some minor issues. First, should the hook specify that it is the first racially integrated public housing development to match what the sources say? Also, in J. Lister Holmes, I read In 1940, he was tasked by the Seattle Housing Authority to serve as the chief architect of the Yesler Terrace development, the first public housing development in the United States.
That doesn't sound right, given that the hook is referring to it as the first racially-integrated one? Clear these two things up and it should be good to go. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:25, 22 August 2024 (UTC)