Talk:International reactions to the 2012 Burgas bus bombing/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dana boomer (talk · contribs) 19:34, 27 October 2012 (UTC)

I am failing this article's GA nomination, due to this not being an article. It is instead a list, and as such should be nominated at WP:Featured list candidates, if the nominators so wish. However, there are several issues that should be rectified first, regardless of whether it's an article or a list:

• The lead needs to be expanded. A one sentence lead isn't enough for a start-class article, much less a 50 kb list.
• Don't use contractions, such as wasn't and isn't, within the article text. They're fine in original quotes, but not in general text.
• Was there really only one nation in Africa that responded? This list seems a bit skewed towards responses from Europe and N. America.
• Six dead links, see here.
• Citation needed tag in the Middle East section.

Good luck at FLC, if you decide to go there, Dana boomer (talk) 19:34, 27 October 2012 (UTC)