Talk:Industry Bar/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Gerald Waldo Luis in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 04:54, 9 December 2020 (UTC)Reply

I was like Whaaa... you can have two people nominate? Anyways, I'll be reviewing this article. GeraldWL 04:54, 9 December 2020 (UTC)Reply

Thanks! ---Another Believer (Talk) 05:18, 9 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
Thanks x 2! Armadillopteryx 05:31, 9 December 2020 (UTC)Reply

References

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These issues seem to be only visible to me, I could just fix it myself but taking it here first to see if y'all think it's needed.

Lead

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Description

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I'll have to spend some time for TV with my fam. I'll come back later with more stuff (as expected). GeraldWL 06:44, 9 December 2020 (UTC)Reply

Gerald Waldo Luis, Thanks for your many reviews of restaurant/bar GA nominations. I have a couple more in the queue and I hope you will consider reviewing Armadillopteryx's other nominations as well. ---Another Believer (Talk) 15:07, 9 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
Another Believer, thanks, I love doing these stuffs. I will be semi-active until Friday ICT cause of stuff, but concluding this week is Decem-freaking-ber, so I'll be able to do more nominations... if I can. GeraldWL 02:57, 10 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
Second check
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History

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Reception

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Final thoughts

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Armadillopteryx, I did a final edit, see if that's fine for you. Overall this has   Passed the GA criteria in my view. Waiting for your response, then I'll close this review page. GeraldWL 04:56, 11 December 2020 (UTC)Reply

@Gerald Waldo Luis: Mm ... I'm not sure how necessary it is, since the History section begins with the story of the owners opening Barracuda. What do you think? Armadillopteryx 05:01, 11 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
Armadillopteryx, Maybe the issue is we mention Barracuda in the Description section before readers get to the History section? ---Another Believer (Talk) 05:07, 11 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
I think, ideally, we'd have a passing mention of ownership before we compare Barracuda and Industry Bar, so that the Notes section is not required. ---Another Believer (Talk) 05:09, 11 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
That sounds ideal. Removing Bara mention in Description would be a good implementation. GeraldWL 05:11, 11 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
I mean, I guess, sure—but it's worth noting that the mention in question is wikilinked. I'll go take a look at it. Armadillopteryx 05:15, 11 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
Armadillopteryx, Your change works for me! ---Another Believer (Talk) 05:19, 11 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
(edit conflict) Cool, thanks! I basically just followed Gerald's suggestion to simply cut out that part of the quote; now Barracuda's first mention in the body doesn't come until the History section. Armadillopteryx 05:21, 11 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
Armadillopteryx, seems to be fine now, Comrades. The green circle should be up soon after I'm having lunch as New York's in the dark. GeraldWL (Pine wish!) 05:38, 11 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
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