Talk:I've Got a Feeling (Ivy song)/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Carbrera in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 01:26, 30 December 2016 (UTC)Reply


I'll be reviewing your article soon.

Infobox

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  • Flawless.

Lead

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  • Needs to be expanded.
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  • was released as the record's second single on October 7, 1997 by Atlantic Records. → where?
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  • The single → The track
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  • Add a part of the composition "vocals, horn section".
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  • Short sentence regarding the CD singles.
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Background and composition

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  • This section is too big when comparing to the others, shall we split it?
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  • Perhaps split in Background and release in one section, while the other is Production and composition.
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  • Split the first and second section in two paragraphs, after the previous point is addressed.
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  • I've Got a Feeling" was taken from Ivy's second studio album, Apartment Life, released in 1997 by Atlantic Records. → I've Got a Feeling" was taken from Ivy's second studio album, Apartment Life, released on October 6, 1997 by Atlantic Records as its second single. It was released on October 7, 1997. + sources for all of this.
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  • Atlantic also → Atlantic Records also
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  • "I've Got a Feeling" was written by Dominique Durand, Adam Schlesinger and Andy Chase, with Lloyd Cole and Peter Nashel handling additional production → add mixing personnel, mastering and so on...
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  • It is a pop song.[13] Supported by a horn → It is a pop song,[13] supported by a horn
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  • 1960s-style harmonies, → 1960s-style harmonies.
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Critical reception

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  • Flick from Billboard' → Flick of Billboard magazine.
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  • radio is given a chance → radio if given a chance.
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  • "The rest is more lighthearted yet still crafted, cleanly produced, stylized old-pop with warmth, such as the cooing" → AllMusic, has a lot more describing the song
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  • "piled on the layers of guitars, creating beautiful, shimmering" → Pop Dose
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  • "catchy pop" → MTV
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Music video

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  • "A music video for "I've Got a Feeling" was released sometime in 1997." → Source?
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  • "while other shots of the members outside of the booth are shown." → while shots of the Ivy members, who are outside of the booth, are displayed.
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  • "play guitars" → play two guitars
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  • "Durand nods her head" → As I see it in the video, she doesn't nod as much as she lowers her head. At least I don't see it as a nod.
  Done – Much better wording! :) Carbrera (talk) 00:56, 7 January 2017 (UTC).Reply

Track listing and formats

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Personnel

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  • Same as previous.
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  • Two columns is more than enough.
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  • Link mixing and mastering.
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Release history

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  • Personally I wouldn't use the links in the same column as the countries but its fine.
  Done – Great. Carbrera (talk) 00:56, 7 January 2017 (UTC)Reply
  • Add the date to the amazon reference.
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References

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  • I would advise to archive all the web sites.
  • Unlike the last AllMusic, reference 18.
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  • Fine.

Overall GA review

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