Talk:Hurricane Marie (2014)/GA1
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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 05:47, 2 January 2015 (UTC)
Hello CB! I notice that you've had this thing up at Wikipedia:Good article nominations since September 7! Anyway, I'm gonna review this article right now. Here are my issues with passing the article:
- Did you fix/address Hurricanehink's concerns on the talk page?
- "barometric pressure of 918 mbar (hPa; 27.11 inHg) in August 2014." - Wikilink "August 2014" to 2014 Pacific hurricane season?
- "The remnant cyclone was last noted by the NHC on September 2 as it crossed" - NHC? What's that? :P
- "the Saharan Air Layer created an hostile area for storm organization" - a hostile area?
- "NHC issued the final advisory on Marie at 0900 UTC on August 29" - Add a colon in the time
- "Minor flooding also occurred in near Acapulco and in Colima.[38][39]" ---> "Minor flooding also occurred near Acapulco and in Colima.[38][39]"
- On Reference #1 and #7, I think "MT" stands for Mike Tichacek
- Add "|language=es" to Reference #36
All in all, it's a decent article. Fix/address these issues and I will pass this article and list it as a Good Article.--12george1 (talk) 05:47, 2 January 2015 (UTC)
CB doesn't seem to have returned to the article. Should it be failed or should we find another TC editor to make the fixes, since there doesn't seem to be much? Wizardman 15:30, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
Sorry this took me forever to get back to, but I'm finally done with updating and making corrections. I've added some new content so it may be worth giving the article another skim through for any additions concerns. Thanks for the review, George! Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:56, 12 February 2015 (UTC)