Talk:Hurricane Hattie/GA1

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 22:35, 13 January 2013 (UTC)

• "Hattie left about $60 million in damage" - Was this U.S. dollars in the year 1961? Or was it Canadian dollars in the year 1994?
• "station recorded a pressure of 991 mbar and sustained winds"..."reaching 924 mbar by 1300 UTC; a lower pressure of 920 mbar was computed at 1700 UTC that day" - Convert those three millibar (mbar) observations to inches of mercury (inHg).
• "Initially, forecasters at the Miami Weather Bureau predicted the storm to turn northward again." - Wikilink "Weather Bureau" Never mind, it is already linked earlier, but I wasn't paying attention to it.--12george1 (talk) 22:51, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
• "As it was dissipating Tropical Storm Simone was developing off the Pacific coast of Guatemala." - Why Tropical Storm Simone dissipated and developing at the same time? Add a comma between "dissipating" and "Tropical".
• "the agency noted the potential for heavy rainfall in the southwestern Caribbean, which could potentially cause flash flooding." - I'm not sure, but I don't think the words "potential" and "potentially" should be used in the same sentence.
• There are several alternating uses of Belize and British Honduras. Try to stick to one or the other. Also, do you have to note almost every time that British Honduras is modern day Belize?
• "The name Hattie was retired and will never be used by an Atlantic hurricane again." - Wikilink "retired" to "List of retired Atlantic hurricane names" or post it at the top of the Aftermath section like this: {{See also|List of retired Atlantic hurricane names}}
• There is inconsistency with the use of first and last names in the references. On #1, #3, #4, #6, and #13, you have only last names. Clark = Gilbert B. Clark, Dunn = Gordon E. Dunn, Kraft = Raymond F. Kraft, Moore = Paul E. Moore.

All should be taken care of! --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 01:24, 14 January 2013 (UTC)

Nick work! I am going to passed this article now,--12george1 (talk) 02:35, 14 January 2013 (UTC)