Talk:Human impact on river systems
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--Mahad Nadeem Janjua (talk) 13:00, 17 July 2020 (UTC) ==
Hello,
Glad to read up on this topic that you have chosen to write about.
My first suggestion to you would be to restructure the introduction to the article so that it offers a glimpse into anthropogenic effects on river systems, which is really what the article is titled.
Under the section "Human impact", there is a sentence mentioning various types of human activities. Am I correct in assuming that you intended to list these activities as those that affect river systems? If so, an explicit expression stating this would be useful to remove confusion on the readers' ends.
The term "river behaviour" has been repeatedly used in the article, but to a reader it remains rather generic. Perhaps it would be more useful to specify what exactly that means? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mahad Nadeem Janjua (talk • contribs) 13:16, 17 July 2020 (UTC)
Feedback edit
Hey, there! pictures, the table, structured headings make it a nice read. In my opinion, it gives a comprehensive overview on the topic, which is a super broad one. I am happy to extend some parts in the future! For the table, I would add some sources, either separately for each information (if gathered so?) otherwise one source at the header. Cheers! --Floba007 (talk) 13:55, 17 July 2020 (UTC)
Revision of the article, revision done by SteffenCoe (talk) 14:53, 17 July 2020 (UTC) edit
Really nice article and written in a way that it catches interest! Good and objective expression of the hazards/consequences.
- I like the introduction as it is very broadly describing the topic. I would only try to make sure to formulate one of the sentences in a way that it also contains the exact title of your article, and then make it bold-printed
- Sensible links to other articles and to main articles that include more on the subsections in your article, + See also section
- What does "cal" and "BP", and "CE" mean in your table? I know different abbreviations for that
- Maybe consider putting subsection "Indicators" into a section for itself? People that know stuff about it could then also add subsection elaborating on the different indicators :)
--SteffenCoe (talk) 14:53, 17 July 2020 (UTC)
Some body comment on human activities on rivers edit
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