Talk:Ho Ho Ho (album)/GA1
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Latest comment: 7 years ago by Cartoon network freak in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:43, 30 April 2017 (UTC)
Lead
edit- by American singer RuPaul → you should specify that he's a drag queen, as well here
- written by Joe Carrano and RuPaul → state "written by Joe Carrano and RuPaul" here for alternation
- I do not see the difference that you are pointing out; could you please explain this to me? Aoba47 (talk) 17:23, 30 April 2017 (UTC)
- @Aoba47: OMG, I meant "written by Joe Carrano and the singer", sorry ;)
- specifically "All Alone on Christmas" → specifically of "All Alone on Christmas"
- negatively responded → other way round
- of his VH1 talk show The RuPaul Show → when was this?
Infobox
edit- Only link "executive producer" once in the "Producer" row
Recording and release
edit- saying "You can hear us → saying, "You can hear us
- a clear message; RuPaul explained: "Even the → a clear message, "Even
- Rhino executive promoted → what does it mean to promote smth executive?
- was made available on on October 28, 1997 → we only need one "on"
Composition
edit- "the fact that I'm doing it" → "the fact that [he is] doing it"
- The final track is a remix of the "Celebrate" → "his" instead of "the"
- It peaked at number 31 on Billboard Dance Club Songs chart on October 11, 1997 and remained on the chart for a total of seven weeks.[13] → This isn't relevant in any sort of way here, so I would suggest removing it.
Reception
edit- Ken Veeder of The Advocate praised RuPual's → "RuPaul's" is written incorrectly
- positivel responding → "positively" is written incorrectly
- Melinda Newman referenced the album → Melinda Newman referenced the album to
- "[m]akes me want to shove a candy cane in my eye" → "[m]akes [him] want to shove a candy cane in [her] eye"
- Connect the third paragraph to the second one
- Include the info about the commercial performance above in the "Charts" section
- Not done as I prefer to keep the commercial performance close to the Reception section, as done in Good Girl Gone Bad and 4 (Beyoncé album). Aoba47 (talk) 17:23, 30 April 2017 (UTC)
Track listing
edit- Corrected things here by myself
Personnel
edit- Change all "-"s to "–"
Track listing
edit- Fixed all alone here
Other stuff
editCopy-violation
edit- 33.3% is still acceptable!
Links
editReferences
edit- As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
- No dead links! Good job!
Outcome
edit- On hold for 7 days! GREAT job with the article!! Best regards and good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:23, 30 April 2017 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: Thank you for the review. I have addressed your comments above. Aoba47 (talk) 17:23, 30 April 2017 (UTC)
- 'Passing this! YAY! Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:53, 30 April 2017 (UTC)
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