Talk:Have You Heard the Word
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Sruthijayanti in topic Unnecessary anecdote and other issues
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Unnecessary anecdote and other issues edit
It is definitely not needed to mention the injury and situations that followed it. This is irrelevant to the recording information and deviates from the encyclopedic tone a Wikipedia article should have. Also, the mention of "Lawrie" is very unclear - who is Lawrie? It would help to name the members of The Fut in the top paragraph before suddenly referring to them. The citation format is also unclear. In general, I don't think this article flows well or has any sort of stable Sruthijayanti (talk) 01:32, 26 March 2022 (UTC)structure.