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Latest comment: 12 days ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review

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Nominator: MaranoFan (talk · contribs) 14:45, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:35, 30 July 2024 (UTC)Reply


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):  
    b. (citations to reliable sources):  
    c. (OR):  
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):  
    b. (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):  
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:  

(Criteria marked   are unassessed)

I will review your article now, as you are due this one! --K. Peake 18:35, 30 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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  • Shouldn't the infobox list the song as being from Nu King?
  • "They wrote it with" → "They wrote the song with"
  • "and its producers," → "and the producers,"
  • ""Hands on Me" describes a romance" → "it describes a romance"
  • Pipe Music critics to Music journalism
  • "about the interpolation as well as" → "about the interpolation, as well as"
  • Wikilink New Zealand Hot Singles per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • Pipe BGM to Circle Digital Chart
  • "The music video for it features an appearance by Paris Hilton and depicts" → "The accompanying music video features an appearance by Paris Hilton, and depicts"
  • "a medley of "Hands on Me" with" → "a medley of the song with"

Background and release

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  • Add a comma after "Savage Love (Laxed – Siren Beat)"
  • "in a new one" shouldn't this be something like "on a new song"? Also, please invoke the ref at the end of this sentence per this usage of direct quoting.

Composition

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  • Retitle to Composition and lyrics
  • Wikilink doo-wop on the audio sample text
  • "Sonically, "Hands on Me" has" → "Musically, "Hands on Me" has" and merge with the above para
  • Change neighbour to neighbor per American English

Critical reception

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  • Merge with the below section and retitle to Reception and promotion
  • Wikilink Rolling Stone India to itself per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • "believed the song "butchered"" → "believed the song "butcher[ed]""
  • "the age of 9 and" → "the age of nine and" per MOS:NUM

Music video

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  • Make this the second para of the above section
  • Wikilink music video on the img text
  • "let's see it"." → "let's see it."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
  • Change neighbour to neigbor
  • "it. That's hot"." → "it. That's hot.""

Credits and personnel

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  • Good

Charts

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Release history

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  • You need to add multiple citations to the reference to back up a various release

References

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  • Fix the date formatting for ref 4
  • Add different countries citations to ref 9 for the various release
  • Pipe HRT to Croatian Radiotelevision on ref 11
  • Cite Circle Chart as publisher instead on ref 13
  • Wikilink Rolling Stone India on ref 18 per MOS:LINK2SECT

Final comments and verdict

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Oh wow, the speed. I'll have these addressed within 48 hours. I'm trying to complete this one other article and I will keep getting hella OCD if I do not finish that first, lol.--NØ 20:52, 30 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
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