Talk:Han Sai Por/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Jacklee in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Well-written
Yes Awadewit (talk) 18:58, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
Factually accurate and verifiable
  • I'm wondering if there is a complete list of Han's work's somewhere. The article uses a lot of different websites to compile a list in the "Artist career" section. Awadewit (talk) 18:58, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
    • Comment: I haven't come across one yet. However, I note there is a self-titled 2005 book. Let me visit the library and see if there is a list in that work. — JackLee, 19:33, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
    • Comment: The book Han Sai Por (2005) does mention a number of the works, but it doesn't appear to be a complete list. — JackLee, 08:48, 28 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
Broad in its coverage
  • Most of the statements about Han's art are from her. What have art critics and scholars said about it? This is the weakest part of the article, in my opinion. Are there reviews of her shows, for example, that could be used here? Awadewit (talk) 18:58, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
    • Comment: Art criticism isn't terribly well developed in Singapore. Let me have another look at the news articles I obtained through Factiva. However, my impression after having gone through them once was that there weren't any. — JackLee, 19:33, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
    • Comment: I've added some critical commentary about Han's work. — JackLee, 08:48, 28 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
Neutral
  • However, Han's oeuvre should not be underestimated. - I'm not quite sure who is underestimating her works or why this needs to be stated. Awadewit (talk) 18:58, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
    • Comment: I was trying to say that Han's work isn't limited to her stone sculptures with organic forms that she is probably best known for, and to provide a bridge between the discussion about her organic sculptures and her other work. But perhaps this is unnecessary editorializing on my part. Can you suggest some alternative wording? — JackLee, 19:33, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
      • How about: "Beyond her stone sculptures which embrace organic forms, she has also designed geometric pieces." Awadewit (talk) 23:15, 23 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
Stable
For the past six days. :) Awadewit (talk) 18:58, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
Images
All check out fine. Awadewit (talk) 19:00, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Reply

I'm putting the article on hold for seven days. Awadewit (talk) 18:58, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for taking the time to review the article. My responses are above. — Cheers, JackLee talk 19:33, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
Let me know when you are done checking for the above material. Awadewit (talk) 23:16, 23 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
OK, I've finished revising the article. — Cheers, JackLee talk 08:48, 28 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
Looks good - I'm passing the article. This was such a pleasure to read, by the way! Awadewit (talk) 02:01, 30 June 2009 (UTC)Reply
Thanks very much! — Cheers, JackLee talk 09:34, 30 June 2009 (UTC)Reply