Talk:Halloween (The Office)/GA2

Latest comment: 12 years ago by TBrandley in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 14:36, 18 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Issues:

  • Image: Add File:TheOffice(US)2-05.jpg image to the infobox
  • Infobox: Add "running time" to the infobox
  • Lede: Link second season
  • Lede: Link American to Television in the United States
  • Lede: Show runner → Showrunner
  • Lede: Unlink United States
  • Lede: The episode first aired in the United States on October 18, 2005 on NBC. → The episode first aired on NBC in the United States on October 18, 2005
  • Lede: Remove the "guest stars" from the lede. It should be in "production"
  • Lede: Add how many viewers on original broadcast and 18-49 rating to lede. It must summarize contents.
  • Plot: we see Michael alone at home in front of the television → Michael is alone at home in front of the television
  • Production: his second → his second credit
  • Production: It goes to details that have nothing to do with the episode on the "production" directing part of the section. For example, he created this, wrote for this. There is a separate article for that.
  • Production: Show runner → Showrunner
  • Production: "This episode is the only episode to date to have a quote to play over the Deedle-Dee Productions title card in the closing credits". Reference is needed. Honestly, I don't know if it needs to be even needs to be there.
  • Production: Deedle-Dee Productions also produces King of the Hill — Nobody cares. Don't mean to be to mean here.
  • Production: References for this: During the pre-production for the episode, the cast and crew realized that the Halloween conceit would allow the various cast members to wear costumes, rather than their "usual, realistically plain suits
  • Production: Add "guest stars"
  • Production: Add the television rating on television in the United States
  • Production: copy-edit — "Halloween." → "Halloween"
  • Cultural references: "Due to the presence of Halloween, many of the employees costumes reflect movie and literary characters. Kelly is dressed as Dorothy Gale, but Michael makes an insensitive remark about Bend It Like Beckham. Dwight is dressed as a Sith, one of the characters in the Star Wars universe capable of using the "dark side" of the Force". — All needs references
  • Reception: "Halloween" originally aired on NBC in the United States on October 18, 2005 → "Halloween" was originally broadcast on NBC in the United States on October 18, 2005
  • Reception: The episode was viewed by 8 million viewers and received a 4.1 rating/10% share among adults between the ages of 18 and 49. This means that it was seen by 4.1% of all 18- to 49-year-olds, and 10% of all 18- to 49-year-olds watching television at the time of the broadcast. The episode was the number one ranked episode among adults, men, and women in the 18–34 demographic, and achieved its highest 18–49 rating since the season's premiere. — References all definelty needed, most likely to ABC Medianet
  • Reception: "Halloween" retained 73 percent of its lead-in "My Name is Earl" audience → "Halloween" retained 73 percent of its lead-in My Name Is Earl audience
  • Reception: An encore presentation of the episode, on June 6, 2006, received 2.2 rating/7% share and was viewed by over 4.8 million viewers - Unneeded, don't need to a rerun ratings for the US
  • Reception: Add UK airing, with References
  • Reviews: Need of expanding
  • Reviews: Add more reviews.
  • Reviews: Was it well received by television critics, mixed, or negative
  • Reviews: Cleanup needed
  • References: Yahoo → Yahoo! TV
  • References: Ref. 4 — publisher to work for TV Guide
  • References: Ref. 6 — work to publisher for Fox Broadcasting Company
  • References: Ref. 13 — published on October 18, 2008, according to the reference
  • External links: Link NBC.com to NBC
  • External links: Add The Office Wiki link

On hold. See big boo-boos in article. TBrandley 23:52, 18 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

I got most of the issues taken care of. I explained the rationale of some of my actions too.--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:29, 19 June 2012 (UTC)Reply
Thank you. I am ready to promote now. TBrandley 00:42, 19 June 2012 (UTC)Reply