Talk:Gonococcemia
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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 October 2021 and 20 November 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jlg4947. Peer reviewers: DPrinceDO.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 22:32, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
Article categorization edit
This article was initially categorized based on scheme outlined at WP:DERM:CAT. kilbad (talk) 15:22, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
Peer Review edit
General info edit
Whose work are you reviewing?
Jlg4947
Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)
Lead: edit
The lead has been updated with the content that the user has added. Could use a line about treatment. lead is clear and concise with a good introductory sentence.
Content: edit
Content is up-to-date and relevant to the topic. I do not thing there is any content that needs to be added or removed.
Tone and Balance: edit
The article is well balanced between its different sections. The tone is neutral and does not appear to try and influence the reader.
Sources and References: edit
The sources are current. All of the new material that has been add appears to be backed up by sources. Sources come from peer reviewed journals and one from the CDC which is a reputable source. All the links in the sources work.
Organization: edit
The added content is clear, easy to read, and well organized.
Images and Media: edit
No images or media has been added to this point but the work is ongoing so they may plan to add some.
Overall Impression: edit
The added content has improved the article significantly. Great statistics in the epidemiology section. A few images might help the article.
DPrinceDO (talk) 21:49, 11 November 2021 (UTC)