Article relies almost entirely on discipline-specific jargon that is not accessible to a general audience, the subject symptoms are described through a simile to another esoteric subject instead of through explication, and almost all descriptive terms are also jargon. I will come back and do what I can when I am less pissed off at the complete disconnect between medical writing and accessible vocabulary.
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