Talk:Ghost Town (Kanye West song)/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 18:16, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
Hey Kyle Peake, I'll begin my review now. It's a larger article so it might take me a little longer. LOVI33 18:17, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
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Infobox and lead edit
- Not sure if psychedelic should be labelled as a genre since is refers to specifically the guitar and "sounds." LOVI33 20:12, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
- Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Background and development edit
- First paragraph is really long, maybe split it into a few.
- Done how's that look? --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Composition and lyrics edit
- "The track includes" → ""Ghost Town" includes"
- "Guitar is included" → "A guitar is included" OR "Guitars are included"
- Done for the above --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Release and recording edit
- [sic] → [sic] using Template:Sic
- Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Critical reception edit
- Looks good.
Accolades edit
- This could maybe be a subsection under 'Critical Reception' due it still having reviewers comments
- Not done since that is two paragraphs and a table, so is enough for its own section and the comments are from the lists only --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Commercial performance edit
- "Freeee (Ghost Town, Pt. 2" → "Freeee (Ghost Town, Pt. 2)"
- Done don't know how I made that typo --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Live performances edit
- Looks good.
Appearances in media edit
- Looks good.
Sequel edit
- Looks good.
Credits and personnel edit
- Change 'Credits' subsection to 'Personnel'
- Done but should I keep the credits adapted bit though? --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Charts edit
- Looks good.
Certifications edit
- Looks good.
See also edit
- Looks good.
Notes edit
- Looks good.
References edit
- Copyvio score looks good at 35.9%
- refs 4 and 5: MOS:CAPS issues; or is that just how PartyNextDoor is stylized?
- Not done since that is how his name is stylized --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
- ref 25, target Sheffield, Rob to Rob Sheffield
- Done and fixed a few more refs up too --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
External links edit
- Looks good.
Final comments and verdict edit
- On hold for now. This article is extremely well written, great job! The comments above I'm sure wont take too long. It's great reviewing your articles! LOVI33 20:12, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
- LOVI33 Have responded above, thanks a lot for the comments and I hope this becomes a GA soon. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
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- LOVI33 Thanks a lot! --Kyle Peake (talk) 14:48, 7 July 2020 (UTC)