Talk:George Brian Sinclair/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Eddie891 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) 22:10, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
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- "Sinclair directly witnessed a number of nuclear tests during Operation Grapple, and twenty years later" I think it'd be worth specifying the year
- "the recovery of 85 Twynham huts" what is a 'twynham hut'?
- "becoming known as "that Sapper brigadier who solves problems and gets things done"." by who? Everyone?
- "and improved for use Phantom fighter jets to allow the Royal Navy's two aircraft carriers to return to home waters." I don't see the connection between the Royal Navy and the airfield-- could you explain that a bit?
- "This led to a dispute with the government during which Sinclair " what was the dispute over?
- "The January 1983 replacement of John Nott as defence secretary by Michael Heseltine" so did Heseltine follow Nott in the role or was he the person who replaced Nott with someone else?
- Special:Diff/993521760 is my ce, please check to see that the changes are acceptable to you
Minor things, holding Eddie891 Talk Work 01:43, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
- Source spotcheck