Talk:Gender disparities in Kenyan education
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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 January 2019 and 1 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): KrystleW.
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Comment edit
Hello all! I am currently working hard on this page for a class at my school. Any and all comments would be appreciated but please tell me what you do. Njeri Muturi (talk)
Comments and suggestions edit
Hi! First let me say this article is looking good. You have a lot of really valuable information already, and I appreciate the attention you're paying to such an important topic. But I do have some comments. First off, some of your sections are missing content. You can either add content to these sections or delete them, but I don't recommend leaving them the way they are. Use the information you have and revisit how you are going to organize this article. My other comment is that I noticed you do not have sources to back up all of your claims. In general, if you can't source it don't include it. I look forward to seeing where this article goes! Best of luck. Cebrown721 (talk) 00:34, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
Additions to article edit
Njeri Muturi, I think you have done a great job with this new article! I agree with the above suggestion about making sure not to leave open sections. Also, I think it would be beneficial to add some links to other articles, and also add your page to similar topics so that more people can be aware of your contributions. Overall, you have created a great article that hopefully others will continue to edit. AllyBremer (talk) 01:27, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
Responses as of April 2014 edit
Thank you so much for your comments! I did extensive editing. I removed all empty spaces and instead expanded on the sections I did have. I also made sure to go back and make sure all of my sentences are backed up by a reliable source. In addition, I added blue links to various articles, added two pictures, added categories, and edited grammar mistakes. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Njeri Muturi (talk • contribs) 04:02, 1 May 2014 (UTC)