Talk:Forest Glen Park, Maryland/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by West Virginian in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:30, 17 March 2021 (UTC)Reply


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  • "populated place in"' place seems like an odd choice of word here. Location? Area? Region?
  • Why two refs in the lead? Move them into the main body of the article, it always looks weird to ref just tiny aspects of the lead.
  • "Forest Glen Park is a scenic, forested suburban community" the first sentence said "Forest Glen Park is an unincorporated community and populated place..." so this reads odd now and is a bit repetitive.
  • Thank you for this catch! I've rendered the original sentence as "The community is adjacent to Rock Creek and Rock Creek Regional Park, and to the United States Army's Forest Glen Annex. I also ensured that unincorporated community was repeated below in the main body of the article. -- West Virginian (talk) 13:28, 20 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "platted" what does that mean?
  • "...intersection in summer 2020" unref.
  • "south east" vs "southwest" consistency.
  • (M-NCPPC) if you abbreviate it, use it, don't re-use the full version and re-abbreviate later.
  • "day National Park Seminary, were" overlinked.
  • " Metropolitan Branch.[9][10][12] The" overlinked.
  • "who transformed the resort into" resort repeated.
  • "During World War II, the" no need to link that.
  • "The Capital Beltway (I-495) was" overlinked.
  • "in the 1960s. In 1965" repetitive.
  • "which is represented by Democrat Andrew Friedson" as of.
  • "in Kensington.[28] Albert" overlinked.
  • "border.[36][35]"" order.

That's all I have, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:43, 18 March 2021 (UTC)Reply