Talk:Folie à Deux (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 02:17, 14 August 2012 (UTC)

I'll take this one for review. Let's read some X-Files. TBrandley 02:17, 14 August 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: Link science fiction

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: The episode originally aired in the United States on May 10, 1998 on the Fox network → The episode originally aired on the Fox network on May 10, 1998

  I rearranged this, but left the part about the United States. You've suggested I add that before, and I don't want to have to go through the other articles, since removing it wouldn't match.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: Quotes shouldn't be inside the monster-of-week link, but outside of it

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: in its initial broadcast → upon its initial broadcast

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: It received largely positive reviews from critics, with many commenting upon its creepiness. → It received largely positive reviews, with many critics commenting upon the installment's creepiness.

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Plot: "Dana Scully" is?

  Done. Add that she's his partner.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Plot: As per MOS:ACRO, please write out SWAT fully on the first mention, then write (SWAT)

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Production: Unlink Folie à deux; it's already linked above in "Plot"

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Production: "In fact," is not needed.

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Production: "North Vancouver, British Columbia" should be two separate links

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Reception: → Broadcast and reception. To match with other ep. articles

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Reception: premiered → originally aired

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Reception: "Folie à Deux" premiered on the Fox network on May 10, 1998. The episode later debuted in the United Kingdom on BBC One on March 10, 1999 → "Folie à Deux" premiered on the Fox network on May 10, 1998, and was first broadcast in the United Kingdom on BBC One on March 10, 1999

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Reception: "Todd VanDerWerff" of who? Surely his writing for someone, The A.V. Club?

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• References: Ref. 13: pp should just be p, like the others

  Since it covers more than one page, the correct format is to write "pp".--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• External links: on → at

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• External links: Categories should be sorted in alphebitcal order below please.

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

Overall; like all others, a great article. In good shape, once the issues are fixed, I will be happy to pass. Cheers, TBrandley 16:59, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• I've addressed all the issues. Thank you for reviewing.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:23, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

  Looks good. I'll pass the article. TBrandley 02:03, 20 August 2012 (UTC)