Talk:First Battle of Alihuatá

Latest comment: 11 months ago by Spinney Hill in topic This article

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This article is very confusing. I have done my best to make sense of it by changing things here and there but without much success. I see that the sources are all in Spanish. There may not be many English sources. I suspect this article is a translation from the Spanish Wikipedia or contains translations from those sources,perhaps by a machine or a Spanish speaker who is not particularly fluent in English, or a combination of the two. The translation needs to be redone by an editor who is fluent in English, whether he or she is an English or a Spanish speaker. If I have altered the sense of anything please change it for something better. Just two examples of the problems: On 12 March what did the Campo Regiment mount? Did they mount their horses or bicycles or did they mount an attack. What is meant by the opening of the road : was it built, was it made usable. was it dug up? Was it cleared of enemy troops? . . Spinney Hill (talk) 20:32, 14 March 2023 (UTC)Spinney Hill (talk) 16:27, 23 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

I have changed some more things but there is still much to be done that I cannot puzzle out. Come on Wikipedians ,please help me out.Spinney Hill (talk) 09:17, 15 November 2023 (UTC)Reply