Talk:Executive dysfunction

Latest comment: 3 months ago by Scientific Pen in topic Article Editing as an Assignment

No examples; jargony edit

This article's Top Section and "Overview" contain no concrete examples of the condition and give very few generalized ones. This article also is mostly jargon, none of which is adequately explained in plain language.

Concrete examples need to be added, and the jargon needs to be replaced with lay terms, or explanatory clauses need to be added. --Atkinson (talk) 20:00, 22 December 2019 (UTC)Reply

This article needs to have the Lead simplified and made easier to understand. BrentGillm (talk) 22:23, 29 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

Article Editing as an Assignment edit

Greetings everyone, I am as psychologist currently pursuing a masters degree in ‘Neuroscience’ at Uskudar University in Istanbul, Türkiye. I have taken on the responsibility of editing this Wikipedia article. I have already completed all Wikipedia training modules to be more proficient in editing. As a part of my assignment for my master course ‘Biotechnology in Neuroscience’, I chose to edit this article ‘Executive Dysfunction’. My goal is to improve the overall article by enhancing references, citations and making edits in the areas that require improvement. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Also I would appreciate any feedback or support on my edits.

Sincerely, Scientific Pen (talk) 21:25, 16 January 2024 (UTC)Reply