Talk:Every Mother Counts 2012/Archive 1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Another Believer in topic GA Review
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---Another Believer (Talk) 06:57, 20 December 2016 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:50, 18 January 2017 (UTC)
Initial comments
- An alt description is required for the album cover
- Done. ---Another Believer (Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)
- Any information on the producer?
- Not from the sources I came across. The album's liner notes may have more detail, but I don't have access to them (I even checked my local library system's collection). ---Another Believer (Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)
- In the lead, should you mention that six of the tracks included were previously released?
- Usually album descriptions note previously unreleased tracks, as there's nothing really special about tracks folks have already had access to before. I think this detail belongs in the article's prose, but not the lead. ---Another Believer (Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)
- I could be wrong about this, but I don't think a comma belongs after "live rendition of "Sister" by Dave Matthews Band"; and, should ", respectively." be placed after "Sting's previously available song."?
- I think the comma was added by a Guild of Copy Editors reviewer. Perhaps the sentence is more grammatically correct with the comma, but since you and I both think it isn't necessary, I'll go ahead and remove. I also added "respectively". ---Another Believer (Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)
- "Corinna, Corrina" should link to "Corrine, Corrina"
- Done. ---Another Believer (Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)
- Reference #1 - Link to AllMusic
- Done. ---Another Believer (Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)
- @Carbrera: Thank you for reviewing. ---Another Believer (Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)
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