Talk:Ever After (Marianas Trench album)

Latest comment: 10 years ago by 174.130.204.69 in topic Storyline Quality

Storyline Quality edit

I Read through the story line section. It was a bit confusing. Not to sound mean or anything, but it read as though it were written by a 12-year-old girl (considering the subject, this is a likelihood). Is there somebody familiar with the story line who can maybe clean up that section a bit? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 174.130.204.69 (talk) 23:05, 10 December 2013 (UTC)Reply