Talk:Epping Forest Maryland

Latest comment: 10 years ago by DESiegel in topic Sourcing and notability

Style edit

This reads like a personal memoir or essay for much of its length. In addition, even as an essay, the long blocks of un-paragraphed text are a burden to most readers. This need a significant rewrite including a trim to be a proper article, in my view. DES (talk) 01:28, 25 September 2013 (UTC)Reply

Sourcing and notability edit

The cited sources are pretty much all primary, and in any case generally offer only passing, trivial coverage. Titles should be provided for the web cites. DES (talk) 01:30, 25 September 2013 (UTC)Reply

The sources cited do not seem to establish notability. Additional independent reliable sources which discuss the subject in some depth should be added if possible. DES (talk) 01:32, 25 September 2013 (UTC)Reply