Talk:Enron/Archives/2019
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Sdkb in topic Intro breakdown
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Intro breakdown
The intro to this article really breaks down in the last paragraph or so, in terms of grammar, neutral language, and who knows what else. Can someone with pertinent knowledge clean it up? - Sdkb (talk) 03:21, 11 August 2019 (UTC)