Talk:Emma Stone/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 12:44, 10 April 2016 (UTC)Reply


I'll be happy to take this JAGUAR  12:44, 10 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Initial comments edit

  • "such as creating awareness on breast cancer" - might be worth linking breast cancer
  • The lead summarises the article well, so no issues here
  • The Awards and nominations section has no citations
  • No dead links. Impressive!
  • No dab links

FrB.TG I can hardly believe this myself but the article is flawless. It is well written, fully comprehensive and all the references check out. I would have passed this outright if it wasn't for the unsourced Awards section, in which the GA criteria states that every section or paragraph must contain at least one citation. Once that is addressed, this can pass. Well done on all the work! I literally couldn't have brought up any other issues in this review.   JAGUAR  13:21, 10 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Thanks! Well, one can refer to the sources in the career section. I did not cite sources in the awards section as I did not want to repeat a bunch of sources which look weird. ツ FrB.TG (talk) 13:28, 10 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
That's understandable. Passing   JAGUAR  13:30, 10 April 2016 (UTC)Reply