Talk:Edayilakkad

Latest comment: 7 years ago by GenQuest in topic TNT?

TNT?

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When I first saw this article, I thought it may just be the poster child for one needing wp:TNT to fix it. Unfortunately, I think it still is. I just tried to clean it up, yet am so confused. The article talks about these different islands while using grammatical articles whose subjects are unclear, so they get all jumbled up in the mind of the reader. For example: first the island separates a lake from the sea, then it's in a river?!? Is the lake actually a sea inlet? Why are these other islands even mentioned? -if they are islands and not regions, other inlets, mountains, villages, etc. I really can't tell from the article. The acreage, square meter areas, square mileage, etc. also don't make sense. I hope I at least got some of what the article was trying to say correct.

Along with the use of very broken english, in both syntax and grammar, it may just be better to start over with this one. Thoughts? GenQuest "Talk to Me" 23:53, 6 July 2017 (UTC)Reply

Agreed, also see Wikipedia:Village_pump_(proposals)#I.27ve_had_enough._.22Approved_articles.22_clearly_no_better_than_ones_that_skip_it
I've AfDed it. Andy Dingley (talk) 00:11, 7 July 2017 (UTC)Reply