Talk:Eastern Idaho State Fair
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Kasm279 in topic Massive Cleanup
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Massive Cleanup edit
This article is an embarrassment to the fair, the state, and whoever wrote it. I'm going to try and clean it up, but here are some examples of the outstanding failures of the author to grasp basic grammar concepts.
"In 1942, the Eastern Idaho State Fair would be home to some 500 Italian prisoners." - Tense shift "The Indian Relay Race have been a popular event throughout the fairs history." - Plural/singular mixup "There are many different types of food that come to the fair." - No comment...
Overall the Attractions section looks like it was written by a fourth grader as a research paper. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kasm279 (talk • contribs) 15:25, 18 August 2013 (UTC)