Talk:Each Time You Break My Heart/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:14, 3 September 2017 (UTC)

Lead

• for his self-titled debut studio album (1987) → for his eponymous debut studio album (1987).
• commercial. He later decided to delve into music business and signed with Sire → commercial, later deciding to delve into the music business, and signed a record deal with Sire.
• Link "lead single"
• set to be included in Madonna's → change "in" with "on"
• but it did not make the final track list. → Remove "it"
• "Each Time You Break My Heart" was released in 7" and 12" maxi formats. → This should be moved to the very beginning of the lead (on 2 November 1986 in 7" and 12" maxi formats.
• A promotional video for the song was released directed by → A promotional video to accomany "Each Time You Break My Heart" was directed by
• reaching the top-ten → reaching the top ten
• United Kingdom, receiving certification from two of those markets. It was also a dance-hit in the United States. → United Kingdom. While attaining Silver certifications in France and the United Kingdom, the track was also a dance hit in the United States.

Infobox

• Flawless ;)

Background and recording

• Unlink Nick Kamen
• There isn't an article for "Sunspel", so you need to unlink it
• had immediate impact with Levi's sales → comma before "with"
• Link "Sex symbol" to its respective article
• and its sales was also boosted → and its sales were also boosted
• self-titled → eponymous
• was the lead single from the album → was selected as the lead single from the record
• But since she was → However, since she was
• also contains background vocals by Madonna → refer to her as "the singer" here for alternation
• The Latin Rascals did → "...handled"

Release and reception

• Robert Erdman took the cover artwork photograph of the 7" single, showing Kamen smiling, while Bob Merlis took the picture listed in the back cover, which is a black-and-white image of Madonna and Kamen in a recording studio. → What do you mean by "took" and who are those two people?
• was released directed by → no "released" needed
• After four weeks the song → comma after "weeks"
• the top-100 → the top 100
• In France the song attained → In France, "Each Time You Break My Heart" attained
• Across Europe the song → comma after "Europe"
• top-ten → top ten

Track listings

• Flawless ;)

Credits and personnel

• Flawless ;)

Charts

• Flawless ;)

Certifications

• Flawless ;)

Release history

• The article need a "Release history" section; take this as an example.

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 6.5% is super!

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article

Outcome

• Nice job with the article. I put it  On hold for 7 days. Good luck editing and best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:27, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
  • @Cartoon network freak: again done. Except the release history section. I couldn't find the exact dates for the other nations except UK. Hence hardly mattered to add just one entry. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 03:22, 15 October 2017 (UTC)
    • Gladly passing this! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:58, 15 October 2017 (UTC)

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