Talk:Doomsday (The Office)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 10:58, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this one - I'll give it a read through now and list any issues below although given your GA pedigree here I doubt there will be a lot! ;) Miyagawa (talk) 10:58, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

These are mostly likely to be annoyingly nitpicky in nature I'm afraid:

• Check that the citations all have the same date format. Also TV by the Numbers is in italics in one citation but not in the others.
• Could do with linking doomsday device on the first appearance.
• Plot: could do with a "pm" after 5:00 otherwise it might be read as 5 in the morning.
• First mentions of Pam, Oscar, Erin, Kevin and Val need to have the actor names following them.

That's all I've got. Once those issues are fixed, it should be good to pass the criteria. Miyagawa (talk) 11:15, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

OK, I believe I've addressed all the issues. Thanks a ton for reviewing this. :)--Gen. Quon (talk) 15:49, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

From what I can see the article now meets all the requirements to be promoted to GA. Good job. :) Miyagawa (talk) 20:14, 8 April 2012 (UTC)