Talk:Dia (film)

Latest comment: 6 months ago by DareshMohan in topic GOCE copy edit
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WikiProject iconThis article was copy edited by Voorts, a member of the Guild of Copy Editors, on 27 September 2023.

GOCE copy edit edit

A few notes:

  • This movie sounds extremely depressing.
  • The plot summary needs some clarification.
  • Please review MOS:... and MOS:FILM.
  • I folded the "Themes" section into "Critical reception" because (1) it didn't really discuss any themes and (2) it was too short. I also folded "Box office" into "Critical reception" because it was one sentence long, and incorporated "Legacy" into the "Release" section, which I renamed "Release and remakes".
  • Given the acclaim the film received, I have to believe tha tthere are more than four reviews from major Indian publications.
  • The lead should be rewritten to hit all of the major points per MOS:LEAD.

voorts (talk/contributions) 01:11, 27 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

@Voorts: Thanks. Very depressing movie. Hopefully plot makes sense now. DareshMohan (talk) 00:11, 28 September 2023 (UTC)Reply