Talk:Death of Jaahnavi Kandula
Latest comment: 8 months ago by Tiggeritian in topic Active voice
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Police fired — Preceding unsigned comment added by 190.129.165.247 (talk) 21:19, 17 September 2023 (UTC)
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Journalists often use passive voice when writing about police actions. Many actively criticize that this reduces the attention on the officers. Resources: https://sojo.net/articles/how-journalism-obscures-state-violence https://www.poynter.org/reporting-editing/2017/how-bureaucratic-language-strangles-journalisms-accountability/ Tiggeritian (talk) 14:43, 18 September 2023 (UTC)
- I adjusted the intro but left "The death of Jaahnavi Kandula" as I didn’t know if that is a Wikipedia style issue. It should be “Jaahnavi Kandula died." Tiggeritian (talk) 14:47, 18 September 2023 (UTC)