Talk:Days of Wine and D'oh'ses/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:47, 9 September 2019 (UTC)

Comments

• Where is the production code (infobox) referenced?

The external link: "Days of Wine and D'oh'ses episode capsule". The Simpsons Archive.

• "Barney becoming sober because they did not think a sober Barney would be funny" bit repetitive with Barney and sober being used twice in quick succession.

Reworded

• Same for " critics, including Chris Turner, have also criticized "...

Reworded

• I don't think it's appropriate to part-link a quote as you have with the blackboard gag.

Fixed the quote

• Two paras starting with "Meanwhile..." is repetitive.

Fixed

• "new bike" bicycle?

Fixed

• " leaving them in" placing them in. Or putting them in...

Putting them

• "to do an " feels clumsy, to write an, to create an...?

Fixed

• "He told the idea to Lacusta," -> "He told Lacusta of the idea"

Fixed

• Our article on showrunner has it as a single word.

Showrunner is one word

• "Alone Again, Natura-diddly" should have a capital D.

Fixed

• Are there any viewing figures available?

Fixed

• " have commented on Barney becoming sober. IGN staff members commented i" comment is quick-repeated...

Fixed

• Prism Awards (prose) or PRISM Awards (ref).

Faxed

Short and sweet, hence only a handful of reasonably straightforward comments, so I'll put it on hold while we deal with them. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:56, 11 September 2019 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Issues solved. AmericanAir88^(talk) 20:12, 11 September 2019 (UTC)

Article passed. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 20:32, 11 September 2019 (UTC)