Talk:D. J. Wilson/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:10, 14 November 2017 (UTC)Reply


Will review. MWright96 (talk) 09:10, 14 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

General

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  • Any numbers between one and nine should be spelt out in words per [[[MOS:NUMERAL]] apart from dates and percentages etc.

2015-16 season

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2016-17 season

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  • "helping Michigan reach the sweet sixteen round," - If it is officially called "sweet sixteen" then capitalise it; otherwise it isn't encyclopedic language, and needs changing.
  • "His 203 rebounds were the most by a Wolverine since Mitch McGary 4 years earlier and his 57 blocks were the most by a Wolverine in nine seasons (Ekpe Udoh)." - don't try and repeat the world "Wolverine" in one sentence
  • "which gives them until May 24 " - which gave them until May 24
  • "relegating him to participation in physical measurements and interviews." - relegating him to taking part in physical measurements and interviews
  • "Declaring early enables him to seek advice from the NBA Undergraduate Advisory Committee by the April 14 application deadline, participate in workouts with NBA teams beginning April 25 and makes him eligible for an invitation to the May 9 — 14 NBA Draft Combine.," - Declaring early allowed him to seek advice from the NBA Undergraduate Advisory Committee by the April 14 application deadline, participate in workouts with NBA teams beginning April 25 and this made him eligible for an invitation to the May 9 — 14 NBA Draft Combine.

2017-18 season

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Going to hold this review until the reviewer has responded to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 20:41, 14 November 2017 (UTC)Reply