Talk:Cyclone Osea/GA1
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Yellow Evan in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 02:20, 5 June 2013 (UTC) Review will commence in a few days. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:20, 5 June 2013 (UTC)
Lead and infobox edit
Both fine.
Meteorological history edit
"...to the northeast of the Northern Cook Island: Manihiki." "...to Manhiki, in the northeastern Cook Islands." This is more suitable for a reader unfamiliar with the region.
- I personally prefer the current wording as its a lot easier to understand and more factually correct since Manhiki is more in the Central Northern Cook Islands.Jason Rees (talk) 22:58, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
"...French Polynesia sialnd group." Island group.
- Changed to just French Polynesia.
"...the low level circulation center due to increased wind shear." Please wikilink wind shear.
- Unless im mistake WP:Overlink prevents us from linking it twice (its linked in the lead).Jason Rees (talk) 22:58, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
Preparations, impact, and aftermath edit
Please wikilink Scilly.
Conclusion edit
A very nice concise article. I will pass when everything has been addressed. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 20:57, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
- Should be sorted.Jason Rees (talk) 23:01, 7 June 2013 (UTC)