Talk:Copenhagen Metro/GA1
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Dough4872 in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 16:26, 16 December 2009 (UTC)
Comments:
- "a tramway, a light rail and a rapid transit", "system" should be added after "light rail" and "rapid transit".
- "all the initial nine stations", either "all" or "the" should be removed.
- "and work to rebuilt to metro started" sounds awkward", Perhaps change "rebuilt" to "rebuild".
- What are "tin schedules"?
- The sentence "The start of must be built at the same time of the City Circle Line being built, or face a multitude higher construction costs and long stop of operations later." sounds awkward.
- The sentence "The tunnels consists of two parallel barrels; the run through stable limestone at about 30 meters (98 ft) depth, but are elevated slightly at stations." also sounds awkward.
- The sentence "On the elevated sections, the tracks lay on each their parallel pylon-supported viaducts." needs to be reworded.
- Combine the sentences " The stations are built with island platforms.[23] The stations are fully accessible for people with disabilities."
- The sentence "The track is standard gauge." is short and should be combined with another sentence.
- "at the south of M1"? South end? South of the line? You need to be more specific here.
I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 16:26, 16 December 2009 (UTC)